Thank you!! I definitely want to keep this going - I'm thinking of separating it into chapters to be played one at a time.
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Wow. There's some really good, dark storytelling here, as well as some very meaningful social commentary. I love stories with a hefty dose of each.
I enjoyed going through it. I tried a few times to explore the branching paths.
The first time through I just sort of rolled with it, without suspicion. It was bland and a bit plain. The fun comes in when trying to resist going to Home™, and you start to see how sinister it is.
Wow, great job for your first twine game/draft. I hope to see a continuation of this story in the future. It's a bit scary already but the story is compelling.
Nicely done, it got me invested into the story even though it's short and unfinished. Can't wait to read the rest when it get released.
I really want to know what happens next! Great job so far, can't wait to see this continued. I admit, I was hoping for a branching story but that's going to be hard in a short time.