This is my first attempt at making a short interactive fiction game for My First Game Jam.

The game isn't as polished as I'd like, but I'm really happy with what I've managed since it's my very first try. If I get time, I'd like to work on the overall look of the game, add some sound and maybe simple images, and possibly add to the story.

Thanks for playing! ^^

P.S. If anyone is thinking about trying My First Game Jam, do it! I've learnt so much and it feels great to finish a project, even if it's not perfect.

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Thank you!! I definitely want to keep this going - I'm thinking of separating it into chapters to be played one at a time.

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Wow. There's some really good, dark storytelling here, as well as some very meaningful social commentary. I love stories with a hefty dose of each.

Excellent job!

Thanks for your comment, much appreciated!!

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I enjoyed going through it. I tried a few times to explore the branching paths.

The first time through I just sort of rolled with it, without suspicion. It was bland and a bit plain. The fun comes in when trying to resist going to Home™, and you start to see how sinister it is.

I'm so glad you enjoyed and explored a few different paths!! Thanks for playing :D

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Wow, great job for your first twine game/draft. I hope to see a continuation of this story in the future. It's a bit scary already but the story is compelling.

Thank you!! I definitely want to add more to the story. Thanks so much for playing :D

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Nicely done, it got me invested into the story even though it's short and unfinished. Can't wait to read the rest when it get released.

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I really want to know what happens next! Great job so far, can't wait to see this continued. I admit, I was hoping for a branching story but that's going to be hard in a short time.